Whether in a direct mail piece, brochure, white paper, Web
content, or email, your copy will have a greater impact if it answers
the buyer's real questions.
For a Product Purchase
Answer the questions that follow to give prospects the information and reassurances they'll need to make a purchase decision.
What is it?
Customers don't really believe that you have "solutions," the favorite
marketing buzzword of technology companies today. Instead, buyers know
your company actually sells hardware, software, and/or
services--because the product's type may influence the purchase
decision. In all copy elements, identify the product by name and type,
so the reader clearly understands what you are selling.
What will it do for me?
State the product benefits clearly and concretely; relate them
specifically to the prospect's problems, needs, or environment.
Describe potential applications, configurations, or implementation
alternatives that will help the prospect understand the product's value.
How hard is it to learn?
You don't want prospects to reject your product from further
consideration because they don't think it will be worth the effort of
learning something new. Describe product features that support user
learning, such as help features, training videos, or the product's
design itself.
Is it compatible with what I've got?
Most technology buyers already have a substantial base of hardware or
software with which your product must work. List compatible products or
platforms and describe their level of compatibility or integration with
your product.
What if it doesn't work? Describe
any guarantee or warranty for the product, such as a 30-day money-back
guarantee. Also give information on customer service and support
programs, including the availability of online tools for self-service.
Do I need to buy anything else?
Very few technology products operate on a standalone basis. Describe
all prerequisites for product operation, including minimum and optimum
configurations if applicable. For materials intended to promote a
direct sale, this information can increase the prospect's confidence
that he or she is making the correct purchase decision.
How much does it cost?
If appropriate, clearly and completely state the price for the product
and any options, as well as other offer terms (such as an expiration
date). Verify that all copy which describes prices and purchase terms
complies with applicable commerce laws and marketing industry
guidelines.
Where can I buy it or get more information?
Indicate if the product is available only from the manufacturer, or
from distributors, dealers, or retail outlets as well. Include a list
of outlets or provide a phone number and Web URL where prospects can
place an order or access dealer and retailer information.
Product Upgrade
Upgrade
buyers--whether your own customers or users of competitive products
you're trying to switch--have many of the same concerns as new
purchasers. However, your materials must also answer the following
questions that are unique to upgrades.
Why should I switch?
Users of competitive products certainly ask this question--but so too
may your customers. Surprising? Realize that customers may have
"upgrade fatigue" because they haven't yet learned, or perhaps even
installed, the last version of your product. To motivate an upgrade
purchase, the feature/benefit statements must be compelling, and the
key benefit stated prominently and often.
Will it change what I've already got?
The concern that prospects are expressing with this question is whether
the upgrade will preserve existing files, configurations, applications,
or other work. Describe the compatibility of the upgrade with the
user's current product and environment, as well as how training and
work procedures will carry-over to the new version.
Are you changing anything else?
Indicate whether the upgrade means new customer support programs or
changes to any other aspect of your company's relationship with the
user.
What do I need to order? List all items or information (e.g., a product registration number) the user must gather before ordering the upgrade.
Many
other customer questions may apply to your product or markets. Identify
these buying concerns, answer them in your copy, and you will write
better materials for marketing technology products.
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